Another Golden Dawn

Another Golden Dawn

 

Where did the mainland go

before the latest storm hit home

...

Horizon lights extinguished

each of them now forlorn and gone

...

Yet here we have another

golden dawn, just look at her now

...

Smiling down upon those of us

gathered upon this unforgiving shore

 

 

Reviews

[emmajoy]

We need a poet to remind us how beautiful it is to wake up to 'another golden dawn. To see colour bright dancing on/off walls and window panes should surely slip us from bed into Life. Right or wrong, for good or not so good ~ that matters. Beauty's in the eye of the beholder and, whatever
lights the way.

[Neville]

What a lovely gift you have pinned to this page of mine emmajoy ... many kindly thank you's and truly true ... Neville :)

[olla]

I wanted to wish you a Merry Christmas and I found you in the glory of a new day.. and is that not the true Christmas Tiding.. Merry Christmas Nevile.. and a glorious New Year..

[Neville]

I really can't thank you enough my friend ... I can however wish you & yours a fabulous Christmas and a happy, healthy and safe New Year :)

[sette]

a poem about hope that perhaps the sun will come out to shine once again

[Neville]

You might very well be write ... thank you my friend .. I seriously hope you are well.. Wishing you All Good Things,

Neville

[Chris Shaw]

There will always be storms, some far worse than others. The virus has brought one of the worse to the UK that we have known. There have been many, many deaths and sorrow will linger for many years to come. The aftermath won't be an easy ride. However, the turning point has come, those in isolation, separated from the mainland, will now have the opportunity to participate in life again. The roll out of the vaccine is here and next year there will be more golden dawns when so many of us do not have to live in fear of death.

Multi layered poem Neville, , other meanings, but the virus is the one that hurts all of us most of all.

Chris

[Neville]

I aint gonna argue with fact .. and hopefully that is a fact.. thank you for stopping by Chris.

Neville

[alanwgraham]

Your fine poem is enigmatic Neville. Where and when but we supply our own answers. Cast on a perilous shore we all need the golden dawn. I like when the reader can take some ownership of the poem. It comes from the poets skill.
Hope all is well. I've just had two weeks in hospital but back on an even keel now.
Cheers Alan

[Neville]

So good to hear you are back on that even keel me old mate .. I have been thinking about you, honest n truly ... many thanks for stopping off here for a bit on ya way forward ... Go well Alan & stay safe my friend :)

[Light and ashes]

This complexities of living in a fallen but still beautiful world. Sometimes it seems like the world inside us has ended...but the world outside keeps going on and on.

[Neville]

How did you manage to get inside my head like that and slip out again without me noticing until just now .... Mayb thanks for leaving a note behind and not doing any damage whilst you were here .... N :)

[Light and ashes]

Lol.... I'm an INFJ.. that's kind of what we do..no worries though. ;)

[Neville]

... Hey, I am INFJ too .. aint we summat else eh... :)

[Light and ashes]

Really?....Cool..yep

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the sun shines brightly, but it is a weary light for so many who are suffering right now.
the Callous rains have already fallen...and life is soaked in their blood.

j.

[Neville]

......... everything seems to have a weary taint to it these last few months ... there is no novelty to suffering is there jacob ... we just go to keep on going and hopefully wear the bugga down .. thanks for visiting & stay safe out there .....
N.

[Lorry]

Appreciating the beauty in such a barren landscape of late, we can be grateful for the gentle reminders that the world is still spinning and normality resumes, despite no longer quite knowing what normality is any more.
The horizon is still there mate, its just following social distancing protocols and took a few thousand steps back.
It will be clearer one day, fingers knees toes and elbows crossed.

[Neville]

You have such a reassuring way with ya ... I feel almost better already sir .....
:) x

[Lorry]

Glad to hear it mate. No point in adding to the voices of discontent at a time like this... But that doesn't stop all the morons breaking lockdown who think the rules don't count for them. Every little helps, says me n Tesco 😊

[Neville]

...................absobloominlutely squire n truly tooly too................ 😊 :)