Quaffed

Quaffed

 

I am a guilty secret

Your poison slowly sipped

The elusive aftertaste you crave

Residing on your lips

 

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

almost like a 4 line conversation...she: lines 1 and 3.
He: lines 2 and 4...
deadly.

[Neville]

............. that's one way of looking at it .. cheers jacob :)

N.

[Fay Slimm]

Toxic maybe but I like secrets when aftertastes stay 'til next time waiting lips are smothered with kisses..........well we can at least dream ........x

[Neville]

there's nowt wrong with dreaming Fay .. I do it all the time ..........
:)

[Danny Metcalfe]

I like this. It is short and sweet and had a nice mystery to it. :)

[Neville]

..... thank you Danny M .. that'll do nicely sir ....

[poetgurl]

Very well written and expressed, this has an amazing flow to it

[Neville]

thank you kindly and true my friend .. much appreciated :)

[emmajoy]

Anything using a word like 'quaffed' has to be similar to one of Chaucer's tales. So, from now on will call you Geoff, you sauce-pot!

[Neville]

.... I have been called a lot of things before .. Geoff aint one of them, till now .. but I quite like G's ..

Thanks Gemma :)

[emmajoy]

Remember scene in The Knight's Tale?

[Neville]

... the old uns are the best uns aint they just :)

[barleygirl]

My first experience of being "quaffed" in this way, I was about 15 & he was 18-ish. He was always chewing cinnamon gum & ever since, I've equated cinnamon-on-the-breath with other aspects of having been so near his lips *sigh* Fondly, Margie

[Neville]

......... I know that cinnamon gum .. cheers BG :) deep sigh.. fondly .. Neville

[Chris Shaw]

Most people might think this is about a secret drinker. I am not most people. This appears to be about something far more interesting. Sensual as well as secretive. Clever brevity and red hot with it.

Chris

[Neville]

.............. Now aint that just me thank you Chris ..