Negative in Blue

Negative in Blue

 

It was no big secret

She was so much more

Than  

Just a negative in blue

Leaning soft against

A hard  

Honey yellow marble

Pillar

Surprisingly still cool

Despite the rays ..

Yes 

It was there

Her sun shocked hair

Fell loose

And still wet

From dancing in and out

Of waves

Later though they both

Dined

On fallen fruit

And then did nothing

Except make love

And counted sunny days ..

 

 

 

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

I'm a sucker for a happy ending Neville ... I like the forever more in this one.. smart play with the negative against some fine imagery and color says i ...
"Her sun shocked hair
Fell loose
And still wet" ... that's where I was captivated ... action, movement and contrasts ... she is most certainly a Sports Illustrated woman of the month says i! Such a lucky man your hero ;)
E.

[Neville]

.. you n me both brother .. like happy endings I mean, but then I get the feeling you knew that, maybe even before I hit send .......... Hope you are okay Gene and staying on the write side of safe ... I have a take out booked for Sunday 13.00 my time ... and shall raise my glass to ya at precisely 13.45 ................. and down ya neck if you have a pop this eve :)

N.

[Einstein Noodle]

thank you sir .. and back at ya for sure! Slainte! this being said at precisely 5:31 AM ;) tho me glass wont be full for a few more hours :))))))))))))))))

[Neville]

.......... gotcha :)))))

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

It's cool to read you again, Neville.
You've always penned something worth reading.
It amazing!

[Neville]

and a very warm welcome back to you too my friend .. its great to see you here ... All Good Things,

Neville

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is like being in the Garden of Paradise with a beautiful mermaid.
Swimmingly delicious...and what a great title...

j.

[Neville]

ta jacob my friend .. that's write proper English for thank you sir .. thought you should know .. am still not getting notice of your visits ... same thing with Lorry ... please forgive any delays in getting back to ya

Neville
ps

Margie has been in touch ..