Overcome

 

Overcome

 

As the pulsing quickened

each tiny pearl of salt laden lotion shifted

and swirled, in a perfectly decreasing cyclic motion ..

 

 then they paused to gasp and to sigh

as their muscles did clench, release and again tighten

they each rode the same waves until both were sublimely overcome ..

 

 

Reviews

[lightsong]

I see a lesson of life here, yielding to a situation instead of trying to change or break it, surrender, flow with the flow, stop when it's the perfect time, ponder and think, then gain the strength and well to overcome the situation, and that's what sailors do through a storm. You put me in sea life and I love it... perfect allegory.