A Taste of Hunger

A Taste of Hunger

 

None of my walls are straight

So why

on earth should I be straight

with you

Go on, tell me, tell me do ..

I live in a crooked world

of the most acute offset lines

and flawed masonry ..

So why should I pretend to

subscribe

to such technical lineography

Go on ..

Tell me, tell me, tell me do ..

why am I still so

very hurt and oh’ so very hungry ..

 

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoyed these words my friend. Honest, hard and direct. My favorite.
"I live in a crooked world
of the most acute offset lines
and flawed masonry ..
So why should I pretend to
subscribe
to such technical lineography
Go on"
I did liked the above lines. Thank you Neville for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Neville]

thanks for the thumbs up my friend .. much appreciated :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[andrew mitchell]

Another fine write to ponder on Neville. We do live in a obscured world.

[Neville]

... Thanking you my friend and truly :)

[TL Boehm]

flawed masonry. I feel that today. unlike the poem there is no happy in it - but your words are lovely and I read this over and over...just lingering in a moment different than my surroundings.

[Neville]

I am honoured by your visit and truly grateful to you for considering these words my friend .. Hope you are both safe and well :)

[lightsong]

You post some really powerful poems lately dear Neville, the last two lines brought it to the max, a very well written piece my friend, and this one has more depth of Neville's touch and his world.

[Neville]

Thank you G Girl.. you may never know how much your visits mean to me .. Neville :)

[lightsong]

just knock when You need and I am here :)

[Neville]

................ Bless you my friend :)

[Einstein Noodle]

Just keep telling it like it is brother ... just keep writing! :) .. the honesty and humility in this poem are its one two punches says i! Belated Happy Father's Day by the way. Slainte mhath!
E.

[Neville]

... Cheers Gene my brother and back at you ..