Along the Mineral Line

Along the Mineral Line

A Poem by Neville

Along the Mineral Line

 


Listen,


can you hear her coming


All the way


from over yonder


All the way


To Bishops Lydeard


Can you


feel the pressure rising …


Pistons shoving, pushing,


pulsing ..


Hark now listen,


can you feel her coming


Surely,


then it must be,


all of ten plus forty-two


precisely ..


Ah, aaahh ah .. she sighed


Bang


on time then my lovely …


Oh’ yes,


my word, how she did


shake, then gasp


and hiss and spit and


puff, puff, puff …


Sounding like some


frantic, jealous lover


While


steam clouds tracked


above


and slowly trailed away


somewhere


far behind her ..


Oh’ yes, indeed, it did


much like


some off white braided


ribbon might …


Surely he would not


forget


such moments with her


On the way


from Minehead,


along the


good old mineral line ..


Stopping


only briefly, at each of


Watchet, then


Washford and Williton


On her way


to Bishops Lydeard ..


And yes,


then heading back


the self-same way she


always came


and once more home again ….


 

 

 

© 2021 Neville


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another time ... a reliable ride for sure ... "I can hear the train a'comin' ... comin' round the bend!" ;) its the steam and rhythm that gets me sir ... i don't know who would refuse to ride .. or listen ... you aren't stuck in Folsom prison are you!? the disc conversion brake kit for my truck is suppose to arrive on the morrow! Slainte mhath!
E.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


..... jeez ... if only .. and I aint bad with a tourniquet neither :)
Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

fond memories as a teen ..bleeding brakes being the two man job it is .. without a vacuum pump anywa.. read more
Neville

4 Years Ago


those were indeed the days .. I would have managed half a pack of Marlboro too :)



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another time ... a reliable ride for sure ... "I can hear the train a'comin' ... comin' round the bend!" ;) its the steam and rhythm that gets me sir ... i don't know who would refuse to ride .. or listen ... you aren't stuck in Folsom prison are you!? the disc conversion brake kit for my truck is suppose to arrive on the morrow! Slainte mhath!
E.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Years Ago


..... jeez ... if only .. and I aint bad with a tourniquet neither :)
Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

fond memories as a teen ..bleeding brakes being the two man job it is .. without a vacuum pump anywa.. read more
Neville

4 Years Ago


those were indeed the days .. I would have managed half a pack of Marlboro too :)

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Added on June 27, 2021
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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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Sometimes my imagination get's the better of me and then the pen takes over .. more..