Freshly Squeezed

Freshly Squeezed

 

Hey,

would you think any less of me

if I told you

I often spend my afternoons

these days

Remembering the gentle sway

of our clean sheets

Freshly laundered and playing

with the early

Autumn breeze, just waiting

on winter

Smelling of sunshine, freshly squeezed …

 

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

There is nothing better than fresh clean sheets that have been hung outside to dry in the fresh air. Makes me think of my grandma hanging them on the line

[Neville]

now you come to mention it, funnily enough, it does me too .. thank you Poetic Beauty :)

[Poetic Beauty]

You are welcome. Found memories of hiding between the sheets hanging out side

[John the Baptist]

A sweet offering of times gone by, a longing for one apparently no longer in the picture. By God, Nev, this piece of nostalgia has got you back with the tops again. God, I love comeback stories!

[Neville]

thank you for considering these words John, it is very much appreciated sir .. but do please believe all that I said before .. rank, ratings, and reviews are not my favourite cup of tea .. I am big on justice though and truth ..

Take care and go well.

Neville :)

[John the Baptist]

Was not making light of your earlier post, Nev, just highlighting the truth of your comment about the ratings.

[Neville]

then I thank you again then John :)

[Coyote Poetry]

This is poetry Neville. You twisted places where life was easy. You weaved our good memories and you made the reader understand. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Neville]

I am absolutely delighted you found this my my most recent post Coyote and that it went down well ... Cheers my friend ..

Neville :)

[Coyote Poetry]

It did Neville and you are welcome.