Essence of You

Essence of You

 

He wants to breathe

deeply

Every breath she exhales

To billow

and dance freely

Like those

wind filled silk sails ….

Like clouds

in a cloudless sky

Filled

with nothing but blue

He wants to breathe

deeply

The very essence of you …

 

 

 

Reviews

[bianca]

"He wants to breathe
deeply
The very essence of you …"

Your writing is sensual, and I could feel that it's not just about the attraction between two lovers, it's a deeper emotion and you put that in light. Love is described so intensely, and every word made me truly want to read more like this one. -Bianca

[Neville]

I must say, I think you have just made my evening .. thank you so much Bianca2000 :)

[Chris Shaw]

Visually beautiful yet the words have a great depth to them. No shallow romance here, this is a real love.

Chris

[Neville]

the mere fact you noticed left me with a nice warm feeling Chris .. thank you and truly.
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the mere fact you noticed left me with a nice warm feeling Chris .. thank you and truly.

Neville

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Neville... a beautiful poem that takes your breath
and breathes the essence from your laugh and mixes it
with a bit of tears... to make a "toast" to living in the now...
tenderly, Pat

[Neville]

I have absolutely no reservations about drinking to that me luverly Pat .. accept this little x on your left cheek as soft as the velvety down on a young owlets breast :)

[olla]

this is really good Neville.. simply sweet..

[Neville]

thank you my friend .. so very much appreciated :)

[olla]

you have such a way with rhyme.. I wish I were half as good.. one or two lines is the best I can muster..

[Poetic Beauty]

Ahh now that is love and romance. To be filled and consumed with the essence of the very person you are with. To feel who the are entwined deep within your being

I loved this poem from line one to the last line. It is like taking a trip into ones very self and allowing the spirit to combine with our own.

[Neville]

you are far too kind .. thank you though :)