I Do so Hope There are Saxophones in Heaven

Haiku for checking in .................

I Do so Hope There are Saxophones in Heaven

Will I know it when I’m not

when it’s all over

When I've lost the bloomin lot ..

 

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

the title hooked me in Nev. I love the saxophone in the right hands ... this is a senryu tho brother .. with all due respect .. haiku are about nature ;) and you have created a hybrid .. which thoughout the long history of both forms .. the original format is 5-7-5 .. but has been altered throughout history as well.
i do so hope there are sax players in Heaven too .. especially as i walk through those Heavenly gaits .. a forgiven, transformed vagabond sinner. Thank you Lord Jesus! ;)))))))))))))))))) i appreciate the tongue in cheek .. and must say .. i am pretty sure we will all know it when its over sir! enjoyed reading ... inspires all kinds of thoughts
E.

[Neville]

Zen I faikhu from the bottom of my heart sir ........ enjoy those thoughts & have a great weekend ..

N :)

[Einstein Noodle]

i senryu my brotherly luv sir ... its a great weekend already!

[Neville]

senryut back at'cha Gene ..................... tis too :)

[John the Baptist]

Since Boots Randolph is no longer with us, I know there must be saxes up yonder.

[Neville]

Now aint that good to hear .............

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Neville... we will continue to encourage others
in Spirit... when we sigh and pass on... we will understand
and guide others to the promised land where Rainbows are stored. Amen

[Neville]

Bless you Pat and in every shade, colour and hue that this world of ours has to offer .. and gently :) x

[Patricia Wedel]

You are "Priceless".... truly, Pat

[Neville]

U2 Pat .. x :)