Her Very Own Senryu

dont do this at home folks ... unless of course you wanna share something for ever

Her Very Own Senryu

 

He wrote for her

a tiny song ..

Yet one without

a tune ..

My word, she said

how lovely ..

No, senryu he replied

And then she smiled

and later chose

to wear those three

lines proud ..

Set horizontally in fine

print and ink ..

 Below the perfect bridge

of her left hand 

and milk white collar bone ..

Reviews

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Wow! Now this was passionate sensuous little poetic poem! I bet your pen be smoking! Love this poem.

[Neville]

How extraordinarily kind of you imagination101 many thanks for indulging me this very early mane .. Neville :)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

My pleasure!

[Ken Simm.]

Oooh I like this my friend. Don't know why I like it to be honest. But I do. It could be that I associate with the speaker. Romantic excellence.

[Neville]

the fact you say you like it is good enough for me .. but my pen has got a bigger ego & might go into a sulk or summat ................. N :)

[Ken Simm.]

I'll apologise to your pen when I read it again.

[Neville]

No worries she had a strop on .. I've put the cap on her for a while ... :)

[lightsong]

You write sensual and passionate poetry in YOUR own way! now my only disagreement with You why not doing it at home? a forever tattoo written in a special place like home~ well ok we understand this might turn into something else IF a breakup happened later lol. I enjoyed reading this Nevilles' love poem.

[Neville]

bless you my lovely lightsong .. this was written late last night but the inspiration for it came from my fond memories of a previous lover 'Jennifer' who sadly passed away quite recently following a road traffic accident .. we remained friends though & she was my sons Godmother .. x

[lightsong]

My sincerest apology leaving improper review when I didn't know of your loss yet. my warmest condolences dear Neville~

[Neville]

That was not improper, that was probably one of the nicest review notes ever .. on reflection I maybe should not have disclosed the origin of my latest scribble .. and I am fine with it .. so no worries ... Neville x

[lightsong]

Thank You dear Neville~ and You know You can "disclose" anything and I am also fine with it :>

[Neville]

..................................... I do believe I could 💖