For and Aft

Fore and Aft

 

She loved his fore

He loved her aft ..

She loved his rise

He loved her fall ..

She loved him up

He loved her down

They loved each other

First and last ..

No f*****g in-betweens

No not a single one at all ..

 

 

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Nautical terms here fore and aft for the bow and stern of a boat. I know my boats and I can’t help feeling that this isn’t about a boat at all but one of those dames you write about. This little poem looked so lonely. it needed a first visit.

Chris

[Neville]

On behalf of me n my pen, I thank thee Chris & truly tooly ........... Neville :)

[Chris Shaw]

It’s both nautical and norty innit:)

[Patricia Wedel]

A clever way of making love with mystery and suspense… you are naughty and nice. gently, Pat

[Neville]

that's me all write .. bless you my dear literary friend and Seasonal Best Wishes to Yo n Yours :)

[Patricia Wedel]

We have a Live Alberta Spruce Tree with Roots for planting… after Christmas. Hope it dances Live on Christmas Eve… covered with Mistletoe Toe Kisses. Merry Ever After… Pat

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice structure of words and thoughts Neville. I liked how the poetry interlocked. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Neville]

thank you so much Coyote .. I really am most grateful o you sir ... Neville

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Neville.