Blush

Blush

She wore her silk kimono well, less on than off

and a smile too that hid

cruel winter’s first near cherry blossom blush ..

 

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I've been watching all the episodes of MASH recently and just watched one where some members were on furlough in Tokyo and they were visiting the tea houses or Chashitsu and the ladies were serving tea in their silk Kimonos. So elegant and poised, they were. This poem seems a bit more decadent. I enjoyed the read.

[Neville]

............... then I thank you kindly sir

[Cherrie]

Stunning
Visually this poem begins bold with the brilliant Japanese silk. Then scales back to a delicate bloom.

[Neville]

Blushing is becoming quite the in thing ...... Bless ya Cherrie .......................... Neville

[lightsong]

No way! another Japaneses thing lol I love this one, it feels as the first bud of spring, warm, sweet lovely and pure. the title says it all :>

[Neville]

I get the feeling I am being spoilt ........... thank you kindly my friend ............................ N :)