Gooder than Good Even

When it comes to words, sometimes only a neologism will do, maybe .. N :)

Gooder than Good Even

 

When I am done here

I don’t want

you to regret that our

paths ever crossed

for but a moment in time ..

When I am done here

I want you to

sit back, to smile and

maybe relax

and to think to yourself ..

My word, that was so much

better than fine

it was gooder than good

by a mile and a half even ..

 

Reviews

[William Michael Reeves]

I think I'll have to add 'gooder' to my dictionary to write this. Yep, sure 'nuff ... my autonomously correcting device changed it to 'holder'. Once in the dictionary always in the dictionary. And my thanks to you for expanding my poetic vocabulary. I may have created a neogolism or two myself. Just didn't know what they were.

[Neville]

jeez Bill it just don't get any betterer .. thanks a bunion :)

[lightsong]

This bring tears to my eyes dear Neville. Sometimes the pain of loss, of love or the loss of a loved one, let it be by death or something else, rises over all of this. Even in time when we can find our inner smile inside, we feel something inside us is changed and never the same. Very moving and tugging at my heart....

[Neville]

the frown I was wearing all the way home has just been turned upside down and looks and feels like a broad smile .. thank you dear G Girl both honest and true :)

[lightsong]

Awa! ENOUGH sadness! :< are we cursed?!? lol we can curse ourselves with smiles can't we? ;> :>ing*

[Neville]

of curse we are .. of curse we can and I am too :)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This made me smile! To just sit back and relax, and to be happy right where you're at and who you are with!

[Neville]

it just goes to show, doesn't it .. you can beat an egg & a drum, but you just can't beat sitting back and relaxing, and being happy right where you are at and who you are with .. can ya :)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

You are so right!