Over and Out

don't you just know, when enough, is enough ..

Over and Out

Dont stop to think

not even

for one moment

you have

anything to prove ..

Not to me

anyway my darling

I only

ever wanted the

very best

for you, my love ..

You just

seemed to read me

wrong ..

Each time I opened

my mouth,

was like, I just put

my damn

whole foot inside

that’s all

at least for now ..

So ciao, 

I'm over, done and out ..

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

A matrimonial. Well that's how these lines come across Neville. These words here reminded me very much of my first in laws, who seemed to be constantly at odds. Totally incompatible but they stayed the course. Made me wonder what they saw in each other in the first place. Then there's that old saying, opposites attract. They did have their good moments.

Chris

[Neville]

there was a time I could be read without me feeling blue .. today tho I'm just in a rush, so toodle oodle oooh .. We all have our moments, don't we, but this aint one of em .. To be honest, I just dunno where this came from, the visit is appreciated though.

Neville

[Aura]

This piece speaks of a relationship... between two people who is at the ending stages of their bond. In this case, this person has nothing to prove to the other one, they just need to be themselves, but was always interpeeted in the wrong way, now this relationship is on its strings because they cant see eye to eye.

[Neville]

there is more than an element of uncertainty in this scribble my friend .. in truth, it seemed to write itself .. I merely held the pen .. bless you, I do so appreciate your visits Aura ... Neville :)

[Aura]

My pleasure :)