Etna

Etna

A Poem by Neville
"

Tis true I tell ya ...

"

Etna

 

 

She was once, so very, very hot


and she knew it ..


The boys then, called her Etna


and for a while


she would let them all lavat her


But then of course

 

she also knew, she could make


each one of them


erupt just like good old Vesuvius

 

 

© 2022 Neville


Author's Note

Neville
and no kidding ..

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I have visited Sicily and walked the slopes of Etna. I made the mistake of wearing shorts and felt cold, yet my feet were warm. The heat from the lava of past eruptions was still there. I can vouch for that myself. Not long after I saw a news clipping of her in vivid flow. My was she angry and hot. Red hot. You know this is a very visual poem and is steeped in metaphor of an x rating. Good morning Neville.

Chris

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago


I've been there too Chris, helped out a few years ago with the survivors of one of her hot b.. read more



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Ah, yes, I recall such ladies. Haven't seen them lately, though. Haven't lavated much, either.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Neville

3 Years Ago


Take it from me, you need to get out more John .. in the meantime though, lava you than me s.. read more
Very clever metaphors of volcanoes here
Good 👍

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago


Ha ... wot else is a meta for eh' ... bless ya JM :)
Very dance of words Neville. I bet Etna is still a wonderful place to visit. I had to read a few times and I did enjoy the poetry. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry my friend.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago


it certainly is Coyote and the food is out of this world, isn't it .. thank you for the visi.. read more
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

Hello Neville and you are welcome my friend.
Neville

3 Years Ago


Bless ya Johnnie C ... N :)
I have visited Sicily and walked the slopes of Etna. I made the mistake of wearing shorts and felt cold, yet my feet were warm. The heat from the lava of past eruptions was still there. I can vouch for that myself. Not long after I saw a news clipping of her in vivid flow. My was she angry and hot. Red hot. You know this is a very visual poem and is steeped in metaphor of an x rating. Good morning Neville.

Chris

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago


I've been there too Chris, helped out a few years ago with the survivors of one of her hot b.. read more

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Added on July 16, 2022
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Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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