Come Let us Dance Some More

Come Let us Dance Some More

 

Come let us both

dance

some more, then

bathe

beneath a shower

of finest

frozen ash and

hungry acid rain ..

Then

and only then

maybe ..

We might just

make

our way to your

somewhat

battered temple

door ..

Each of us naked

but

with not even a

hint

of regret between us ..

 

  

Reviews

[Temperance]

There is no regret when we expose ourselves completely to someone else and, the exposure is mutual then, each knows what they are dealing with in the other person. All is laid bare with no regrets. This is true love! Thank you for a lovely poem, Neville! T.

[Neville]

she reads him like a book .. thank you dear Temp :)

[John the Baptist]

And they were both naked and not ashamed. Has the sound of Adam and Eve. They better post a "no snakes" sign, though.

[Neville]

Thank you most kindly J t B ............ Neville :)

[Lisasview]

No regrets..perfect... when you truly love and let go...
Lisa, on holiday in Galicia, Spain

[Neville]

thank you Lisa .. enjoy your holiday .. Neville on crutches having torn his cruciate ligament :(

[Lisasview]

Oh no, how terrible.. we all have to be more careful the older we get...
I have always been rather athletic... and, then had two major surgeries in the past couple years.. shoulder and leg...Just call me the bionic woman..
ha ha..
Lisa