Anticipating Angels

Anticipating Angels

 

Here

where I lay

anticipating angels ..

 

While

you lay there

entertaining them ..

 

The

milligrams

no longer count for much ..

Reviews

[W. Barrett Munn]

Perhaps it is my nature but the past tenses used (lay/lay) indicate to me something concluded, and that is why the dosage is now irrelevant.

I think this was probably written by Juliet just as she slipped out of this realm.

[Neville]

By Jove, I think you got it ........... maybe .. Cheers tho' most definitely :)

[Ken e Bujold]

love the juxtaposition of anticipating - entertaining
though having read the thing 4 times now I'm still not sure if this is a lustful or mournful poem

certainly going to require some deeper contemplation

[Neville]

How very kind of you to visit my little scribble Ken .. now whilst a gentleman never tells .. or so tis said .. I am more than willing to divulge the fact that you aint far from the truth ... maybe .. Cheers my friend and truly ............ Neville :)

[Ken e Bujold]

hahaha I love the reply, a kiss n tell that tells nothing a true gentleman indeed