Anticipating Angels

Anticipating Angels

A Poem by Neville

Anticipating Angels

 


Here

where I lay

anticipating angels ..

 

While

you lay there

entertaining them ..

 

The

milligrams

no longer count for much ..

© 2022 Neville


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Perhaps it is my nature but the past tenses used (lay/lay) indicate to me something concluded, and that is why the dosage is now irrelevant.

I think this was probably written by Juliet just as she slipped out of this realm.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago


By Jove, I think you got it ........... maybe .. Cheers tho' most definitely :)
love the juxtaposition of anticipating - entertaining
though having read the thing 4 times now I'm still not sure if this is a lustful or mournful poem

certainly going to require some deeper contemplation

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago


How very kind of you to visit my little scribble Ken .. now whilst a gentleman never tells ... read more
Ken e Bujold

3 Years Ago

hahaha I love the reply, a kiss n tell that tells nothing a true gentleman indeed

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Added on August 21, 2022
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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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Sometimes my imagination get's the better of me and then the pen takes over .. more..