The Making of Them Both Maybe

The Making of Them Both Maybe

The first time they met ..

He made her laugh

so very much, she asked

him for his autograph ..

 

That’s fine by me, he said

between shy smiles ..

But you will have to stay

with me, until I’m famous ..

 

And then, she laughed again

knowing that those

words of his, might just have

been the very making of them ..

 

 

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

Sounds like a long shot, but who knows? Maybe she was having a premonition.

[Neville]

He who dares, reads ........................... thanks, I think ..

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

The beginning of love is always transformative at its deepest evolution. I think your poem captures such a moment my friend. Very nice work Neville.

[Neville]

what a lovely thing to suggest .. thank you Carlos, muchly appreciated, as always ........ Neville

[Crowley]

So much true here Neville. the snowball effect, but, can end in the same fashion I think...lol. Great writing!!

[Neville]

its great to have you take a little peek Crowley .. thank you so very much mate ....... Neville :)

[Temperance]

Such a sweet poem, Neville. A lot is said in this short poem and, makes one wonder what their future will be. Thank you! T.

[Neville]

I am absolutely delighted my dear Temp .. Mission accomplished ............ Maybe :)