While Watching Swifts

While Watching Swifts

It was while tracing

the arc

and the twist

of swifts

with his naked eye

across a

still and salmon pink

September sky

when out

of the blue, it dawned

on him ..

It must, at least be

love, art 

or poetry, he thought ..

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Stunning imagery with a salmon pink sky. Such an attractive pink with a hint of yellow sunshine. Amazing contrast with the movement of the swifts which were in silhouette. I saw it in slow motion. That is art, poetry and love in a bouquet.

Chris

[Neville]

I am truly honoured by your comment Chris & of course, as always and ever, most grateful too :)

Neville

[Ken e Bujold]

love how this one twists and spins like the swifts it describes
great poem Nev
Ken e

[Neville]

thank you Ken, a much appreciated review comment my friend .. Neville

[William Michael Reeves]

The poetry of flight! So the poet thought at the sight. Isn't poetry art, and love of the words we write? Your dawning blue connection read right too.

Billigami

[Neville]

Cheers William .. Neville :)

[Patricia Wedel]

Across a still and Salmon Pink September sky… I read your Poetry and cried… Amen… Pat

[Neville]

Bless you Pat and truly .............. x