Oh' To Be Your Slave Again

Oh’ To Be Your Slave Again

 

If I could have all this

time again ..

I swear I would make

all the same

deliberate mistakes ..

Even if it

only meant, there was

but just the

very slightest chance

that it might

hurt as sweet as this ..

In fact,

I would so very much

prefer to be

your slave, once more ..

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Oh Neville, you were at her beck and call, pandering to her every whim. Besotted I would say :) With hindsight, it was not an ideal situation, yet you would live it all again and the pain as well. That is quite something Neville. Quite an outpouring of emotion here. I hope she looked after you too , but somehow I doubt it would have been to the same extent :(

Chris

[Neville]

If I remember correctly, my pup Brulee might well have been the inspiration behind this particular scribble ... maybe :)

Neville

[Chris Shaw]

If you say so Neville :))

[Just Kim]

Wow, this is so good. Loved those last three lines.
Nicely written and expressed emotions

[Neville]

Thank you so very much JK .. please accept my apologies for the delay in responding .. I have been away ...... Neville :)