That Point Where We Each Begin

That Point Where We Each Begin

 

Here, when we lay

like this

there is no need for

words at all

nor even mirrors ..

Somehow

we lose the want

of them ..

Here, when we lay

like this

where clarity and

clouding

do each reside and

simultaneously

play their

little tricks on us ..

That point

when it all seems

so perfect ..

Here, when we lay

like this

where we are lent

a vague but

otherwise, agreeable

ambiguity ..

That precious point

when neither

you or I are sure, where

you might end

and then, the me begins

or vice versa ..

That then, must surely be

the point

we each become perfect ..

Reviews

[Tom]

Quite often the less said translates into a much more endearing quality, like when two enquiring minds meet and each respective thought pattern is in sinc with the other, it's then love feels so perfectly perfect..

' Here, when we lay like this there is no need for words at all '

You say so poetically emphatically Neville!!

[Neville]

Having you check in and comment on this particular post has pretty much made my Sunday Tom .. Many thanks indeed my friend .. Hope you are well :)

[Ken e Bujold]

where clarity and clouding...what a beautifully etched metaphor. I have added it to my book of carried seeds, please feel to remind me if and when, or I should when and when, it makes an appearance in something of mine. it has a rhythm and metaphorical lilt of pure poetic genius

[Neville]

I am both simultaneously honoured and humbled my friend .. Many thanks indeed ........ Neville :)

[Chris Shaw]

Now this seems like another bit of bliss Neville. No words, just in bed togetherness next to each other in sync. Purrfect.

Chris

[Neville]

I thank you kindly for seeing it my way Chris :)

Neville

[Temperance]

That then, must surely be
the point
we each become perfect ..

And that is such a great feeling! Wonderful write, Neville. Temp

[Neville]

that particular point is kinda special, isn't it .. bless you Temp & always :)

[Temperance]

It truly is!