Just Another Zen Thing

Just Another Zen Thing

 

While here we both lay

like disjointed fragments

of the very same whole

 

Elsewhere, spun honey

pulled through a flame slow

is mistaken for monastery gold

 

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

I see a picture of two in a state of perfect relaxation after love making. Elsewhere the lovemaking goes on, but can’t be compared to monastery gold. That is high value. I do believe you have written of monastery gold before Neville. Two short stanzas telling two completely different stories.

Chris

[Neville]

You clearly have good eyes and a fine memory our Chris .. Many thanks for staying the course with me.

Neville