That Last Time Look

pardon me, but the end is in sight for shore .. no pun intended

That Last Time Look

Although far more

than just

a casual glance ..

But less intense

than a dedicated

stare, of course ..

That last time look

simply cut him up ..

How he so

very much wished

he had gone

blind long before

she had time to cast

it ashore,  

from the bow of the

craft that which

then bore her name ..

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

That last time look. I thought of the last time I was with loved ones knowing I would not see them again. Those farewells are the hardest of all. There is a woman here, a boat and the sea. I also saw a man standing on the shoreline. I am left wondering what the rest of the story was. The ending doesn’t bode well. An intriguing write Neville.

Chris

[Neville]

thanks our Chris, you can beat an egg & a drum of course, but you just can't beat a bit of intrigue now n zen now can ya ... Neville

[lightsong]

Shore or not, Goodbyes will always hurt 💔

touching poem my dear 🤍

[Neville]

thank you so bloomin much my lovely friend :)