When Size is Not Everything

When Size is Not Everything

A Poem by Neville

When Size is Not Everything




She said size is not


everything


I like small things


as well and


very often, instead ..


Like honey bees


bonsai trees,


seed pearls


and humming birds ..


Not to mention


those groovy


mind blowing


mindgasms that you


so kindly give


back to back when


you f**k with my head ..


 

© 2022 Neville


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I left an earlier comment Neville and deleted it. Read this a few times. The lines started so well but the ending sort of grabbed me. For some reason the thought before, during or after came to mind. Then I pondered on what she says you did to her head. Well I’m gonna ask, guilty or not knowing you will neva tell:)

Chris

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago


for a moment back then, I thought I was going crazy .. like one of them now you see it, now .. read more
Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Ha, pleased that I didn’t mess with your head and that i saved you mega bucks Neville. Am I that c.. read more



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and You just "mindgamed" us didn't You? but how smart You are Mr. N ;>.I thought it is gonna be a sweetie lovely poem, then BANG! and yes that's how some people can play with minds. Very smart...

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago


I am honoured my friend n truly .. many thanks for the thumbs up :)
I left an earlier comment Neville and deleted it. Read this a few times. The lines started so well but the ending sort of grabbed me. For some reason the thought before, during or after came to mind. Then I pondered on what she says you did to her head. Well I’m gonna ask, guilty or not knowing you will neva tell:)

Chris

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago


for a moment back then, I thought I was going crazy .. like one of them now you see it, now .. read more
Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Ha, pleased that I didn’t mess with your head and that i saved you mega bucks Neville. Am I that c.. read more

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Added on December 9, 2022
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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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Sometimes my imagination get's the better of me and then the pen takes over .. more..