Reflections Upon a Youth in Passing

they said sleep with one eye open, so she can't creep up on you .. at the time, I wanted her to ..

Reflections Upon a Youth in Passing 

 

Oh’ how

I grieve the loss of function ..

Oh’ how

I mourn the loss of form ..

This

magnificent decline of mine

is so very

determined and unrelenting

although it

commenced, the very same 

day I was born

 

 

 

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Oh my Neville. It’s all down hill from the moment we are born is it? Forgive me if I found this a tad pessimistic although I have to agree that there are certain aspects of getting older which suck? Stay as young as you can :) Having said all that I can’t help feeling it’s gonna happen to all of us to some degree or other. I think I need an early vino:)

Chris

[Neville]

I know I have said it all before, but its not all about pretty pink ribbons, love hearts n bows, is it our Chris .. I hope its a large red .. Cheers.

Neville

[Chris Shaw]

No life is s**t but I keep trying to focus on the ribbons and love hearts:) Yep, a double needed.

[Miss Sharon]

Sad but true my friend. Excellent writing. ~Sharon

[Neville]

Thank you kindly Sharon .. Much appreciated :)

[Mk.t.g]

Wonderfully expressed, Neville! The title is so deep and expressive. Thanks for sharing!
Mk.t.g

[Neville]

Bless you my friend .. thanks a million .. Neville :)

[Mk.t.g]

You're welcome, Neville!