Our Sweet and Sticky Mouths

Our Sweet and Sticky Mouths

A Poem by Neville

Our Sweet and Sticky Mouths

 



Somewhere in the very


welcome mess


of good old here and now


mid a pretty tumble


of creased, white sheets


and likewise,


our discarded underwear ..


I lay sprawled,


with both my eyes closed


and urge you to


complete what from here


at least, feels like it must


surely be your


latest mission .. now near


accomplished ..


And I wonder, but only very


briefly so ..


If it might be possible to feel


any more relaxed


or comfortable, than this ..


But the length


and the depth of my last


gasp and sigh


told me no .. so choose to


dream instead of


blue butterflies and tiny


hummingbirds


each sipping nectar from


the creases and the


stretch marks I imagine


must by now have


formed, at each corner of


my satisfied smile


and notice again, I no longer


crave cigarettes ..

 

 

 

© 2023 Neville


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Filthy habit ……….

That’s the cigarettes I’m speaking about. Smiles of satisfaction though a different story:) Relaxed and comfortable an added bonus as are the white sheets providing they are Egyptian cotton.

A very Neville write.

Chris



Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


You can beat an egg & a drum and maybe a carpet or two .. but you just can't beat Egyptian c.. read more



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Filthy habit ……….

That’s the cigarettes I’m speaking about. Smiles of satisfaction though a different story:) Relaxed and comfortable an added bonus as are the white sheets providing they are Egyptian cotton.

A very Neville write.

Chris



Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


You can beat an egg & a drum and maybe a carpet or two .. but you just can't beat Egyptian c.. read more
Ahh, I remember those post coital moments well, where you and mattress become one and sleep slips into you through your smile.
It wouldn't matter if you did crave a cigarette. There's no way of separating you from mattress known to science, and that includes tommoroes worlds lies about hover boots and ruining childhoods wonder of how amazing adult life would be.
Is it too late to ask for a refund? 😊

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


its way too late for that Loz .. hey, while I got ya attention mate, any idea why I got hair.. read more
Lorry

2 Years Ago

Well a num once told me that's a sign of future blindness, but really!!! Is there really anything wo.. read more
Neville

2 Years Ago


Hardly ... 🐧 ))

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Added on April 2, 2023
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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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