Beneath Her Pretty Dress

Beneath Her Pretty Dress

A Poem by Neville
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Before anyone gets any bright ideas, this is for my daughter who is expecting my first grandchild in July ..

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Beneath Her Pretty Dress


Now isn’t that

truly something else

something

wonderful no less ..

While no longer

taught and flat

but lightly bowed

and more

convex perhaps ..

I hereby do confess

I am already

very much in love

with what has

just begun to show ..

But for now

at least, kept safe

and warm and hid ..

Beneath her

pretty summer dress ..

 

© 2023 Neville


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If only we can protect them like this, forever keeping them safe from harm. Such a lovely read, Nev. You are going to be a doting grandfather, I just know it! When in July is she due? What a thrill it is to be an expectant mother, for her as well as the family. Nothing compares to that first flutter of life inside you. Congrats, Daddio!

We'll expect to see some pictures! ; )

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


what a lovely review and accompanying sentiments you have bestowed upon my little scribble a.. read more
Kelly Scheppers

2 Years Ago

Please let us know of the big event! xo
Neville

2 Years Ago


.......... absolutely .. 🤍



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Ah, the first sights of one's personal spring have sprung, the season of new life and beauty. Congrats I suppose and good wishes my friend.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


on my very word willweb, that'll do nicely sir .. Neville :)
What an exciting time for you both Neville. with your recent news. The prospect of becoming grandparents is certainly a thrill. As is becoming a mother for your daughter, so much to think about and plan . It will change your lives completely and you will adore your grandchild and I know the little one will bring you both so much pleasure. Wishing your daughter a healthy, happy pregnancy with a safe delivery in July. Bet you can’t wait Neville. Such a happy, loving poem.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


I could not possibly ask for any more than what you have so kindly incorporated into your he.. read more
Has a first trimester sound to it, this one. May the process proceed without incident up to and including the introduction.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


thank you John .. we are at 25 or 26 weeks so not far off approaching the third trimester .... read more
If only we can protect them like this, forever keeping them safe from harm. Such a lovely read, Nev. You are going to be a doting grandfather, I just know it! When in July is she due? What a thrill it is to be an expectant mother, for her as well as the family. Nothing compares to that first flutter of life inside you. Congrats, Daddio!

We'll expect to see some pictures! ; )

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


what a lovely review and accompanying sentiments you have bestowed upon my little scribble a.. read more
Kelly Scheppers

2 Years Ago

Please let us know of the big event! xo
Neville

2 Years Ago


.......... absolutely .. 🤍
I saw this title and thought I just have to review that. And I was not disappointed. In the words of the immortal bard "NNNNNG!"

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


Henceforth, let it be known that there will always be a space on my page for a "NNNNNNG!" Th.. read more

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Added on April 11, 2023
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Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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