An interesting thought here. Which would we deem greater? Love or life?
Perhaps, life is a long, senseless sleep and love is a couple of pleasant yet fleeting dreams that break its monotony. Or a tiring cross country walk with a few motor rides in between.
This poem invites much musing and thought!
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2 Years Ago
now you come to mention it, that is precisely the kind of response I was hoping for .. thank.. read more
now you come to mention it, that is precisely the kind of response I was hoping for .. thank you again my friend .. Neville :)
What a poem to consider Neville. Well for what it’s worth a life without having loved must be like asking for steak and chips and only being served chips. The main ingredient is missing. The journey here is all about love ain’t it? Or am I deluded? I guess those who have never loved, just don’t know what they are missing. Love of family, love of friends, well that’s what makes life worth the living.
As you say, love is something else entirely. Have a great day Neville.
Chris
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2 Years Ago
I can attest to the fact that You are not deluded & I am more than qualified to make such a .. read more
I can attest to the fact that You are not deluded & I am more than qualified to make such a judgement .. I also know for sure that you are much loved .. and I am grateful for the time you spent considering this particular little scribble and truly,
Excellent. Interesting and thought provoking. Whimsical and yet deadly serious. A difference that entrances both situations and a really remarkable piece of poetry.
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2 Years Ago
go on, get outa here .. I'm not gonna be able to squeeze through the door at this rate .. ch.. read more
go on, get outa here .. I'm not gonna be able to squeeze through the door at this rate .. cheers tho Ken and BIG uns too sir :)
An interesting thought here. Which would we deem greater? Love or life?
Perhaps, life is a long, senseless sleep and love is a couple of pleasant yet fleeting dreams that break its monotony. Or a tiring cross country walk with a few motor rides in between.
This poem invites much musing and thought!
Posted 2 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Years Ago
now you come to mention it, that is precisely the kind of response I was hoping for .. thank.. read more
now you come to mention it, that is precisely the kind of response I was hoping for .. thank you again my friend .. Neville :)