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Was it insight by chance

  or well-deserved guilt ..

 

That made her remove

  

  all the wrongs she had writ ..

 

Reviews

[DIVYA]

The title drew me in...It seems so final. It feels as if he was a mistake, one that she erased after a lot of thought. A lot of guilt read in the words too. Its the type of deleting that doesn't spare even the recycle bin. He seems really and truly out.

[Neville]

it felt like that for a while, in my head at least .. will they ever see the error of their ways, I doubt it .. of course, having a personality disorder doesn't help .. theirs, not mine :)

[DIVYA]

:) That just makes it worse, I guess.

[Neville]

denial has nothing to do with it .. its all in the knowing .. but it don't make it better or write :)

[DIVYA]

Indeed, a personality disorder is no excuse, people know what they do. They're conscious of their acts but that doesn't help anything. :)

[Chris Shaw]

For a moment Neville I thought the woke brigade had cancelled you. On second and third readings though, your lines refer to something else altogether. More questions, no answers.

Have a good Sunday.

Chris

[Neville]

they probably have .. but on second thoughts, you are of course write .. cheers Chris and you chuck :)

Neville