Undeniably Piqued

these are not just any old words ..

Undeniably Piqued

 

she was both sulky and shy ..

like the top of

some remote and obscured

by cloud

high mountain peak shy ..

allowing nothing

but brief glimpses at first ..

and so hard

to reach, but all the effort

they said in

the end, would be worth it ..

it was a shame

  though, when afterwards ..

she refused to

  let go and spoilt everything ..

Author's Note

these ones speak for themselves .. maybe

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

This reads as sulky, shy and resentful. Mountain peak shyness certainly stands out. Didn’t end so happily by the sounds of things. A bit of a downer in my opinion Neville. You can’t please everyone I guess and people can often be hard to read. I can vouch for that my friend. A page out of life’s living. You win some and you lose some. Have a great Friday. Weekend has almost arrived.


Chris

[Neville]

Thanks Chris and you too my friend ... Neville