Dokkodo

Dokkodo

A Poem by Neville

Dokkodo


 

the path of aloneness


is well trod,


and so, accept it as is ..


remember


pleasure is not everything


remember too,


that partial feelings


are nothing more than


an almighty


encumbrance ..


think deep upon our


world by all means


but not so deep upon


the self ..


desire is not everything ..


remember


regret nothing ..


leave jealousy outside


somewhere insignificant ..


separation


is inevitable so do not


be saddened by it ..


resentments


and complaints


serve no useful purpose


either for the self


or for any others ..


never be


guided or driven


by lust ..


never state a preference


be indifferent


to locations and always


eat what is offered ..


do not linger


over outgrown,


or obsolete possessions ..


never fear death


and decline


to possess goods


solely for your own


comfort in old age ..


respect both Buddha


and the gods


without relying on their


interventions ..


by all means abandon


your body


but maintain honour


and never stray from the way ..


 


 


 


 

© 2023 Neville


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Hi Neville,

A very fascinating philosophy and I enjoyed reading this. Also Googled Dokkodo, which means walking alone, so thanks for the share. I found it quite amusing as my thoughts turned inwards and I realized I follow almost none of these tenets. I doubt many women could do most of these. What I loved about this poem is the interesting manner and the clarity with which you elucidate Dokkodo. Your writing never fails to set me thinking. Enjoyed!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


Who wouldn't like turning your thoughts inwards .. thank you so much for the thumbs up, I kn.. read more
DIVYA

2 Years Ago

You're most welcome, dear Neville. 😊



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Tremendous work, my friend.

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Days Ago


Many thanks Thomas .. Neville
‘Our Chris’revisited these words first seen, almost three years ago. She had an interesting conversation with AI which delved deep into the questions she asked. The answers raised more questions and then more … the more she asked the deeper she travelled and the more she recognized her own light. Have a beautiful day Neville.

Chris 💜

Posted 6 Days Ago


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Neville

6 Days Ago


I am way beyond thrilled our Chris, I am in effect delighted .. and blindingly brightly 💜
Chris Shaw

6 Days Ago

Ha, now that sounds as though you are in my my orbit :)
Neville

5 Days Ago


I would like to think I'm not too far off .. 💜
I really enjoyed this. I felt shades of Kipling's If. A most excellent piece good sir!

Posted 6 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

6 Days Ago


How very kind of you my friend .. Thank you so much .. Neville
Thank you Neville. You are always teaching me something new. Dokkodo, I will research more. Good morning my friend from Michigan.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


Good morning Johnnie C my good friend .. good to see you sir as always .. Neville
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Good early morning Neville and always a pleasure to read your work.
An interesting piece of writing Neville which warranted some serious thought. I also did some research to discover what Dokkodo was. A short work written by Miyamoto Mushashi, a Japanese swordsman, philosopher and Kensei a week before his death in 1645. This must be your account of the 21 precepts contained in it. While some of the points make good sense even in today’s world, it was written from the perspective of a man who was a warrior. It seems that there is not much attention placed on emotions and detachment appears to be promoted. I found it fascinating and will try and read more. I don’t think it is a set of beliefs that would appeal to everyone, particularly the more nurturing in our species. I can see that this piece must have taken considerable time to compose, so well done for an informative post which has got your readers thinking.

Chris




Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


there are those who say its good for ya .. thinking that is .. many thanks our Chris.
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All I can say is exactly. Such powerful exemplary work.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


......................... Gassho
Hi Neville,

A very fascinating philosophy and I enjoyed reading this. Also Googled Dokkodo, which means walking alone, so thanks for the share. I found it quite amusing as my thoughts turned inwards and I realized I follow almost none of these tenets. I doubt many women could do most of these. What I loved about this poem is the interesting manner and the clarity with which you elucidate Dokkodo. Your writing never fails to set me thinking. Enjoyed!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


Who wouldn't like turning your thoughts inwards .. thank you so much for the thumbs up, I kn.. read more
DIVYA

2 Years Ago

You're most welcome, dear Neville. 😊

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