In the Wake of New Gods

In the Wake of New Gods

Never fear

I could not tear up

or otherwise

destroy all the things

that made us look fools ..

And anyway,

who am I to question

the validity

of your new god,

the latest iPhone

and your

unwavering devotion ..

Tomorrow

is another day though

and in the meantime

I shall take

a back seat for a while

and enjoy

what is left of the view

in the golden

wake of your new god ..

 

Reviews

[FGFRANKLIN]

The new god of technology. Science has prevailed! So we go from the old Trojan horse to the new Trojan virus. It's like don't even make love without a Trojan. Well, there is a condom by that name. I have a smart phone. I'm still figuring out how to work the damn thing. But it usually just sits in one place unless I hit the road. My vehicles ain't so dependable so I take my phone in case I have to call Triple A on the highway. I still don't want to hold the thing to my ear so all my calls are on speaker. I start all my conversations with, "You're on speaker." Little people in the house and all that...I don't want her learning any new bad words. I like this Neville...not the inspiration...that's kinda' scary but the observation...that's kinda' brilliant. Good job on this. F.

[Neville]

Thank you Fabian .. Neville

[John the Baptist]

Playing second fiddle to an iPhone does suck. Be on the alert for an outage, though. When their god no longer speaks, they'll come home.

[Neville]

Every single one of em .. except maybe for Ann Droid .. she's a completely different kettle of fish .. Neville

[Relic]

I always make sure yard work takes the place of technology. It's designed to addict us like a drug. Surely it is a new god.

Great poem.

[Neville]

a sound philosophy .. overflowing with insight .. Bless you .. with a capitol B ... Neville

[willweb]

Wow, how appropriate for how things have become and become the most important in our lives. It is almost unbelievable how "Things" are cherished over people anymore. Well said my friend.

[Neville]

thank you Will ..

[Stella Armour]

Sit back and watch them make fools of themselves again whilst you sit quietly and have a knowing smile on your face ... karma prevails.

[Neville]

now there's an idea .. sounds like a plan .. bless ya Stella .. Neville