Just Another Local Legend

welcome to 2014 .. every word is true .. it barely made the local rag .. I just didn't want him to be forgot 🖤

Just Another Local Legend

ever since

he began repeating

himself ..

his friends began

to call him echo ..

later when he

began to talk both

to himself

and in tongues they

all laughed at him ..

later still

when he saw

something dark

in each

of them, they first

became

wary and then,

very frightened ..

so they all agreed

to banish him ..

sometime later tho

when he tried

to stop

a locomotive from

ploughing into

their VW camper

with them all in it

and he 

perished in so doing ..

he suddenly

became a martyr,

a legend

and a local hero

all rolled into one ..

 

 

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the story in the poetry. There are some people, who see too much. Hard to grasp at secret knowledge. I liked the movement of events leading to the strong ending. Thank you Neville for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Neville]

Thank you very much indeed my friend .. Neville

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Neville.

[Lorry]

It's funny how one action can forever change your memory that you leave behind. I just hope his name wasn't Dave or the repitition might land him with being forever known as Dave Javu 😊

[Neville]

somehow I just knew you woz gonna say that Loz 🐧x

[Lorry]

I knew you would 🐧 😊

[Lorry]

I knew you would 🐧 😊