Who Needs Foreplay .. When We Got Poetry ..

Who Needs Foreplay .. When We Got Poetry

From the very first

moment

they met ..

Part way

down and across

from

some hypothetical

empty page ..

Their love proved

unconventional ..

Yet it

remained

unconditional ..

Thus,

he said,

who needs words

these days

and what are they

worth anyway ..

Just some kind

of foreplay perhaps ..

When after all

said and done,

what

I desire most,

is to make you go

uuh, aah aah ah ..

Oh’ yes,

yes, yes yes ..

In succinct terms

then,

I so want us

to do this again

and again, sometime ..

 

 

 

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

A clever write
If this were the first chapter in a short story I’d definitely have a rose bookmark and come back to read second to last chapters!

[Neville]

thank you Julie .. Neville :)

[Stella Armour]

you have to travel the road a little Nev before you reach the final destination.... every poem has to have a punch line at the end :)

[Neville]

Oh' how you make me see clearly .. for yards in fact .. and my word how I thank you for it .. Neville

[Stella Armour]

+(*_*)+

Stella :))

[Ken Simm.]

Er. What's foreplay?
I like this whimsical and sexy. Is that foreplay?

[Neville]

No, nice try, but that sounds like something else completely .. However, thanks for daring to be the first to stop by and leave something .. Neville