Tongue Spillage

Tongue Spillage

Think hard upon

these words

that spill so freely

from this tongue ..

Like so very

many dandelion

clocks ..

Each blown from

here and there,

to kingdom come ..

And while I cannot

blame you

for the weather ..

I do blame you

for all those

silly lies you told ..

And likewise,

for so many other

things besides ..

Like falling

in and out of love,

so very many times ..  

 

 

Reviews

[Crowley]

How is it that we even get by. I might fall in love every couple seconds if I am shopping or at the bar hosting my karaoke show. shows you how you could wade through my thoughts without your shoes even getting damp...lol. You have a whimsical but very serious look about ya. I mean your writing. Handsome and pointed every single time.

[Neville]

Well howdy stranger .. of all the bars in all the world fancy me getting barred from yours .. and for such a long long time too .. Tis indeed good to see you back here Crowley .. I so missed you making me blush like this .. Cheers, hope you n the gang are all fit and dandy .. Neville

[Lisasview]

Hello dear stranger...I know, I know it has been a very long time... Too many broken bones and now a new knee...yikes...so writing was put by the way side. I see you are up and about so I decided to read one of yours...Ah yes, life is full of ups and downs and sadness... Especially when it comes to love... As you know I write a lot about lies.. I think you read Gone and now I have a new one called Waterfall Wishes...
Hopig to actually get back to posting...
Enjoyed reading your work...as always
Lisa, in Mallorca...where there will be thunderstorms today..

[Neville]

Hello &good morning Lisa .. Yes it has been a very long time indeed. I sincerely hope you are now firmly on the mend & can ease yourself back into the Café & recommence writing & posting .. Neville just back from the supermarket as I have a day off ..

[Lisasview]

Thank you so much Neville... and you are so welcome...
Lisa

[Thomas W Case]

Powerful work. You nailed this one.

[Neville]

How kind of you .. thanks .. Neville

[Arundass TP]

Tongue spilling is something like disaster to oneself. Nicely written poem.

[Neville]

thank you my friend .. have a great day .. Neville