The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair

just a little something ..

The Day She Wore Flour in Her Hair

I saw her clearly edged

in golden light,

through sun rays poured

and filtered

through old stained glass ..

She had flour

in her hair and had been

baking bread ..

I simply cannot tell you,

just how hungry

we both then were, that day ..

Reviews

[Ken Simm.]

Simply wonderful Neville. Feel the atmosphere.

[Neville]

Thanks a loch Ken .. so very much appreciated my friend .. Cheers, Neville

[Davidgeo]

That's pretty funny. Do you have a photographic memory?

[Neville]

I dunno but some folk seem to think I'm polaroid

[emmajoygreen]

And thereby hangs a special and precious memory. A canvas to remember, Neville.

[Neville]

I never forget a single thing, it's a cross I am obliged to wear .. thank you for calling. Neville

[olla]

WOW.. Neville.. your poem was on my opening screen this morning.. what a delicious way to start my day.. thankyou..

[Neville]

my very dearest olla, thank you so much for calling on my little scribble today .. I hope you are well my friend and assure you, you have been missed by me .. take care, write on and go well .. neville

[olla]

thankyou dearest Neville.. life takes it's funny twists and turns getting from there to here.. getting back is even harder.. but I do wander in from time to time..

[Neville]

don't you dare ever change, stay true .. just be you :)

[John the Baptist]

I have heard of girls with flowers in their hair, but this is a first for flour. She'll be OK, though, as long as she doesn't get too close to ovens.

[Neville]

...................... crumbs 👍

[Ken e Bujold]

flour in her hair ... a baker's yeast rising to flights of fancy. :)

[Neville]

Maybe .... I thank you though regardless .. Neville :)

[Stella Armour]

golden flower in her hair .... oops flour, all the same and i bet she smelled good too ... new bread aroma :)

[Neville]

.. precisely Stella, thank you my friend, now where ya gonna keep the goldfish? ... Neville :)

[Stella Armour]

eck! Syd ar snake wor reet famished an ee addit....

[Chris Shaw]

Stained glass, golden light and passion. I saw a flower in her hair, but baking flour works too. Another poetry gem from your fine pen.

Chris

[Neville]

Thank you Chris.

Neville