While Out Busy Partying

While Out Busy Partying

A Poem by Neville
"

some things sadly sicken me .. this was one such thing ..

"

While Out Busy Partying


 

He was not good enough


for her, but she


was far too good for him ..


Yet my how her


bones they did rattle like


a sack filled


with old rusty spanners


or something ..


She had not got one single


ounce of meat


on her, at all but he liked


her like that


and she swore she would


never dare to


get fat and risk losing him ..


Sadly, she passed


recently as he, so they say ..


Was out on


the town busy boozing and


partying and


f*****g her cousin the whole


night, clean away ..

 


For little j always remembered with BIG love and respect ..

 

 

 

© 2023 Neville


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"Beats the hell out of me why some people marry the people they marry." Gene Hackman in Bite the Bullet
I just had a talk with my kid about putting people on pedestals to have them fall off square onto your own head. You can't control or change anyone else. You can control your reactions to situations and change your own behavior if the situation merits it. Some people never learn that lesson or go through life hoping things will change. But there are three types of people in the world; those who make things happen, those who observe things happening and are trying to make sense out their world and those left wondering what happened. It's never good to be in that final category. I enjoyed the read. F.

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Neville

2 Years Ago


thank you Fabian, I appreciate both the visit and your thoughts on the matter .. Neville



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I wonder how the cousin was built. I also wonder if he cared, as long as her legs met above the knees.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


an interesting question I care not to ponder upon sir.
"Beats the hell out of me why some people marry the people they marry." Gene Hackman in Bite the Bullet
I just had a talk with my kid about putting people on pedestals to have them fall off square onto your own head. You can't control or change anyone else. You can control your reactions to situations and change your own behavior if the situation merits it. Some people never learn that lesson or go through life hoping things will change. But there are three types of people in the world; those who make things happen, those who observe things happening and are trying to make sense out their world and those left wondering what happened. It's never good to be in that final category. I enjoyed the read. F.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


thank you Fabian, I appreciate both the visit and your thoughts on the matter .. Neville
sometimes we are too good for some people and we don’t realize it, they make us feel that we are not enough. nice illustration ~ chaity

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


Absolutely .. and thank you for seeing it my way chaity .. Neville
Poor girl , insecure in his love for her.
You have to love people for who they are not try to make them into something you would like them to be ..

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


thank you for stopping by my unfortunate little scribble Stella .. Neville

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Added on August 16, 2023
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Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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Sometimes my imagination get's the better of me and then the pen takes over .. more..