Colour Envy

Colour Envy

A Poem by Neville

Colour Envy




The following words


are for those


for whom, colours


no longer matter ..


For those


who may yet still


be indelibly


bruised, or stained


by desire


and by their very


own passion ..


Each of the words


which now


follow and truly


are for those,


blown away by


beauty


and an urgent,


uncertain longing ..


Indeed all


of the following


words are meant


solely for


those, who might


be intent


upon breaking


each fresh new


disciple ..


Before removing


of course,


all traces of old


colours and now


obsolete predecessors ..


 

 

 

© 2023 Neville


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perhaps (a guess!) that those who are in deep passion or desire are not interested in color and those at the opposite spectrum are too stained or woeful to be bother with envying color....the last one about the disciples I can't really tell, unless you mean that the old needs to be replaced by the new, no matter what... I think this is a Spoof on colors or not....very interesting...
Warmly, B

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


thanks a million Betty .. but its only write that a gentleman neva tells .. unless of course.. read more
Betty Hermelee

2 Years Ago

You're very welcome, Neville
Warmly, B



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Beautiful message on gluttony of all kinds. Especially the sensual and emotional caliber. There's so much beauty in this world. Where do we start? I was feeling a bit glum before coming across this. Now I sit in poetic melancholy, reflecting upon what it means to desire and be desirable.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


How very kind of you Dina .. and likewise muchly appreciated .. many HUGE thank you's are on.. read more
perhaps (a guess!) that those who are in deep passion or desire are not interested in color and those at the opposite spectrum are too stained or woeful to be bother with envying color....the last one about the disciples I can't really tell, unless you mean that the old needs to be replaced by the new, no matter what... I think this is a Spoof on colors or not....very interesting...
Warmly, B

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


thanks a million Betty .. but its only write that a gentleman neva tells .. unless of course.. read more
Betty Hermelee

2 Years Ago

You're very welcome, Neville
Warmly, B

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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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Sometimes my imagination get's the better of me and then the pen takes over .. more..