A Slice of Sky

A Slice of Sky

Pastel

amethyst yellow

skies ..

Filled to overflow

with the

silhouettes

of gold eyed birds

in flight ..

I must make notes ..

For surely,

winter is only just

around,

the very next corner ..

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Visually stunning. I saw a photograph of migrating birds yesterday which captured the colours and essence of this poem perfectly.

silhouettes
of gold eyed birds
in flight

Don’t wish for winter too soon. Autumn comes first.

Chris

[Neville]

How kind, thank you Chris, very muchly appreciated.

Neville

[Ken e Bujold]

The beauty of your words is the mental picture they so easily created in my mind's eye. A joy N. even if the plague of ice and slush is the ode's final proffering.

ken

[Neville]

isn't winter around every corner .. cheers Ken :)

[Stella Armour]

Amethyst yellow ... can see it , that purple hazy mist drifting into yellow .
Birds migrating ... but not yet please Neville .
Late summer has yet to show its face .

[Neville]

maybe I am just further away from your equator ma'am

[Stella Armour]

well i live in God's own county and late summer will grace Yorkshire skies ... you just wait and see .

[Bhuyanshi Talukdar]

Painting a beautiful picture of pastel skies, blending amethyst and yellow hues. The sky is filled with the silhouettes of gold-eyed birds in flight, creating a serene scene. Truly in love with this verses ❤️

[Neville]

and I am most grateful to you for visiting & leaving your own impression here .. Neville