Non Figmental

Non Figmental

A Poem by Neville
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I personally don't think it needs one of these ..

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Non Figmental




Where else


would you have


me place


this pen of mine


before


my tongue that is ..


And then,


to write in pretty


hieroglyphs


along those perfect


undulations


of your exquisite spine ..


 

© 2023 Neville


Author's Note

Neville
if these words are appreciated and or likewise understood by anyone at all, then I hope those remaining can also understand why I am loathe to tick that ridiculous over 18 box ..
since at a rough guess I suspect 11 is this years new 21 .. cheers 🤍

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All the rated mature thing does is make some change there date of birth on the site, so that it is pointless and a waste of time, other than to stop people you block from reading it, unless they sign in and find out they still can't read it anyway.
I mean, I'm sure I told them I'm a proper growled up, and they just simply take my word for it!
And anyway, what's the problem Nev. Lots of people like practising tattooing people in their sleep! It's not like it's about.... Ohh! Gotcha now! 😊

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


Cheers Loz .. just for the record, I have only ever blocked four individuals in my entire li.. read more



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All the rated mature thing does is make some change there date of birth on the site, so that it is pointless and a waste of time, other than to stop people you block from reading it, unless they sign in and find out they still can't read it anyway.
I mean, I'm sure I told them I'm a proper growled up, and they just simply take my word for it!
And anyway, what's the problem Nev. Lots of people like practising tattooing people in their sleep! It's not like it's about.... Ohh! Gotcha now! 😊

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


Cheers Loz .. just for the record, I have only ever blocked four individuals in my entire li.. read more
This is very sexual and deliberate..by which I mean to say that the tongue part should be on the other side, not the spine... or is that too obvious? you may be right with checked boxes!
Warmly, B

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


My left eye aint right .. but everything else is firmly in the write place .. thank you kind.. read more
Betty Hermelee

2 Years Ago

You're very welcome Neville
Warmly, B
I have nothing at all against exquisite spines, but my tongue would probably seek the other side.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Neville

2 Years Ago


................... write on John 👍
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is this poem about what i think it is...? either way, wow, this is short but intense. very suggestive and alluring, love it :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


I sure hope it is .. and I thank you for daring to take a wee peek .. Neville
Blimey… at 11 I was still playing hop scotch. I visited, I read and I am just about to say have a nice day :)

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


............... precisely .. thanks :)
Neville
now i know why you never post illustrative pictures our Neville .....

dare you !

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


I certainly dare, but there are those not too far away who would have me not :)
Stella Armour

2 Years Ago

haha .... that's life..
If it is poetic and the artistry is beautiful ( which a i am sure it.. read more
Oooh Matron. And I take it we are not discussing fig biscuits. (Which incidentally are terrible things).
This is rude, Rude I tell you! Signed Major General Top Hand Smyth. Rtr Late of the Doally Rifles.
Matron said its time for my tablets now and I will be allowed to play later. Sorry Nev couldn't help it. This is that good.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


it would be nice to think you might start something of a trend Ken .. but sadly I doubt it ... read more

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Added on September 4, 2023
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Sometimes my imagination get's the better of me and then the pen takes over .. more..