When You Know You Are Blessed

When You Know You Are Blessed

A Poem by Neville

When You Know You Are Blessed




When the queue


is down


to just one


and that one


just so happens


to be you ..


And


when the train


arrives


bang on time


and it


starts raining


the very


same second


you hop


on board ..


When the


outside toilet


seat


is still warm


to the touch ..


And


when you


look in your


new


grandchild’s


eyes


and she smiles ..


Well


then you


just know that


you have


been blessed ..


 

 

© 2023 Neville


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So true, it’s those little things in life that are the most rewarding and they cost nothing and yet make us so happy. How lovely to be blessed with a smile from a grandchild. That takes alot of beating. Lovely, uplifting poem Neville.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


thank you Chris.

Neville



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Yes Neville we often forget or neglect to credit the little things in life that give it pleasure and meaning. I like this format that you use it runs smoothly and takes one right to the end. It is that little thing that helped give pleasure to this poem; outside of it being nicely written of course.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Neville

2 Years Ago


that'll do nicely my friend .. very nicely indeed thank you .. Neville
So true, it’s those little things in life that are the most rewarding and they cost nothing and yet make us so happy. How lovely to be blessed with a smile from a grandchild. That takes alot of beating. Lovely, uplifting poem Neville.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


thank you Chris.

Neville
I was was curious about the topic. I've got to admit your poem hits me with a bang. This is a very delicious read. And it's all about appreciating every positive detail of one's life.
Akinlolu

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


many mighty thank you's kind sir .. much appreciated :)
When one's life is satisfied. We call blessed. Good work 👍

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


Many thanks for stopping by and taking a peek .. N :)
I agree with all those Neville and could probably quote a few more.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


Ta Ken .. I hear it gets chilly on't far side of yon border, so believe it or not, I do unde.. read more
Counting your blessings however small they seem is a humbling to the soul..

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Neville

2 Years Ago


............. Absolutely, I'm only just learning .. ta chuck :)

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Added on September 9, 2023
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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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