Shadow Dance

approximately 99% of this is true ..

Shadow Dance

Even though clearly we

don’t have

enough ink between

the two of us ..

Can you imagine for

a moment

the dance our tattoo’s

might have made,

as we make love with

the sun pinned

to the turquoise sky,

somewhere behind us ..

And can you,

envisage, the dark

of our silhouette’s ..

As they cast freely their

individual shadows

and every single one

of them, is laughing out loud ..

Author's Note

I don't have any tattoo's but I do have a single piercing ..

Reviews

[Lorry]

Your authors note leads me to think you're not the type for an eyebrow piercing, nose or lip thingy whatchamacallit, so I'm hoping it's an ear and it would bring a tear to a glass eye to think it is anything Albert related! 😊
I do like the idea of your shadows having a lol though. I swear I've heard mine giggle when hidden by night and I'm not paranoid to think my shadow is laughing at me as I sleep! 😊

[Neville]

my baby brother pierced my ear when I was around 14 or 15 ..as did I his .. we both got a clip round the one that was not pulsing from our Dad which kinda made a matching pair .. my brother has since had his .. nah a gent neva tells 😇👍🐧

[Lorry]

Well, Ouchie! Just in case! 😊

[John the Baptist]

If you don't have any tattoos, that means she will have to make up for it. I see women who could do that almost every day. Just another passing fad. After it has passed and they want to stop being illustrated, the dermatologists will all be able to retire at 30.

[Neville]

you know what mate, I think you might well be write .. many thanks for the tip off .. N :)read more
you know what mate, I think you might well be write .. many thanks for the tip off .. N :)

[Arundass TP]

A nice poem on tattoo s. Good work 👍

[Neville]

thank you kindly sir .. much appreciated, Neville 😎👍

[Cherrie]

I love a poem that comes with a disclaimer:)
Excellent use of imagery. Really good work.

[Neville]

I always aim to please but the cross hairs are not what they used to be and I occasionally find myself veering leeward, depending on wind direction and other variables .. Cheers Cherrie ..

Neville

[Patricia Wedel]

Yes, Neville... I can Imagine all that... penned as Tattoo's...
and better yet... the Dance that brings the Music of the Night. softly, Pat

[Neville]

you can beat an egg, but you just can't beat that no matter how gently you pat it Pat .. or indeed softly ..

Neville