Mary

Mary

A Poem by Neville

Mary




There she was,


carved


in feint relief


for all the world


to see ..


Held fast tween


grey space


and golden rays ..


Those that


yet survived


to shine


through broken


stained glass


window shards ..


And smiled


upon the alter,


aisle and down


among


the gathered


congregation ..


There were


of course those


among them,


who swore that


it was Mary ..


And one or two


even left


an extra penny


in the collection box ..


 

 

 


© 2023 Neville


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Beautiful imagery here Neville. Although I no longer attend church, I do on occasion visit for the sense of peace they offer. Blind faith comes to mind here. Let them believe what they choose if it helps them travel what can be very difficult pathways for some. These days I light candles at home to pay my respects. Your mum’s name I recall is Mary and I also heard Paul McCartney’s Mother Mary filter through the ether this grey morning. A fine piece of poetry where I travelled to many places.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


thank you so much Chris and yes, my Mums name was indeed Mary .. 💜



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Beautiful imagery here Neville. Although I no longer attend church, I do on occasion visit for the sense of peace they offer. Blind faith comes to mind here. Let them believe what they choose if it helps them travel what can be very difficult pathways for some. These days I light candles at home to pay my respects. Your mum’s name I recall is Mary and I also heard Paul McCartney’s Mother Mary filter through the ether this grey morning. A fine piece of poetry where I travelled to many places.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


thank you so much Chris and yes, my Mums name was indeed Mary .. 💜
I hope they weren't on consecrated ground while swearing it was her Nev!
Honestly, aren't they meant to set a better example to the young uns and the not as sainted?
Maybe those extra pennies were to ward off more our fathers and hello dollies at their next confession! 😊

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Neville

2 Years Ago


maybe .. cheers Loz 🐧..💛🐧x
Beautiful poem. Enjoyed reading

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Neville

2 Years Ago


How very kind, thank you so much. Neville

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Added on September 18, 2023
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Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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Sometimes my imagination get's the better of me and then the pen takes over .. more..