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A Poem by Neville

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Just think

about it before

rejoicing,

that’s all I ask ..

Before

I swing or not

and all

for the sake

of two stocking

frames

and a bloody

brand new loom ..

The world,

our world,

this world is no

better off

for most of it ..

And while they

call it

technology,

or progress ..

It is not though, 


is it .. 


Nor is it a 


solution to our 


collective hunger .. 


I call it 


delusional .. 


And fear it may 


well be the end of us ..

 

 


© 2023 Neville


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hello, Neville, I agree,
it's hard when expectations are there,
willl they be appeased.
----great write!
-----Maynard

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


Many thanks Maynard .. much appreciated .. Neville
1809 Black Plague December

2 Years Ago

of course my Dear, I hear yerr,
I barely, a look, and no mind to most LOL
but I do hav.. read more

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Added on September 25, 2023
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Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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Sometimes my imagination get's the better of me and then the pen takes over .. more..