In the Wake of a Wish
A Poem by
Neville
In
the Wake of a Wish
Maybe we can only
imagine ..
In the wake of a wish
and now wonder ..
But slowly,
just how good we
might once have been ..
© 2023 Neville
Reviews
I like how this poem has a tone of regret and sadness, very good I enjoyed reading it !!
Posted 2 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Years Ago
I like the fact that you see it that way .. many thanks indeed erin:)
So utterly relatable for many. I closed my eyes and floated downstream in slow motion and let the what ifs drown in the wake of the water’s flow. Dreamy title Neville.
Chris
Posted 2 Years Ago
So utterly relatable for many. I closed my eyes and floated downstream in slow motion and let the what ifs drown in the wake of the water’s flow. Dreamy title Neville.
Chris
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Years Ago
Thank you our Chris .. Neville :)
I've always been one to look back, finding difficulty in letting go. To wonder how good it could have been, if only...
Posted 2 Years Ago
I've always been one to look back, finding difficulty in letting go. To wonder how good it could have been, if only...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Years Ago
to part quote good old Julius Caesar .. I came, I saw, I concur ..
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Added on September 26, 2023
Last Updated on September 26, 2023
Author
Neville Gone West folks....., United Kingdom
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Sometimes my imagination get's the better of me and then the pen takes over ..
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