In the Wake of a Wish

In the Wake of a Wish

A Poem by Neville

In the Wake of a Wish




Maybe we can only


imagine ..


In the wake of a wish


and now wonder ..


But slowly,


just how good we


might once have been ..

 

© 2023 Neville


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I like how this poem has a tone of regret and sadness, very good I enjoyed reading it !!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


I like the fact that you see it that way .. many thanks indeed erin:)
So utterly relatable for many. I closed my eyes and floated downstream in slow motion and let the what ifs drown in the wake of the water’s flow. Dreamy title Neville.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


Thank you our Chris .. Neville :)
I've always been one to look back, finding difficulty in letting go. To wonder how good it could have been, if only...



Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


to part quote good old Julius Caesar .. I came, I saw, I concur ..

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Added on September 26, 2023
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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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Sometimes my imagination get's the better of me and then the pen takes over .. more..