Barely Heard Through All the Whispers

Barely Heard Through All The Whispers

Pray hush now

and listen

can you make out

the words

being muttered

into beards,

through teeth,

across tongues

and over gums

around the world ..

Well then,

be sure to note

each one

of these I choose

to share

with you today ..

Expressed,

handed down

and otherwise

conveyed, that is ..

Between one old

forbidden

lover and another ..

Now barely whispered ..

 

Reviews

[Ken Simm.]

Interesting. What should be whispered, shouted and vise versa. What should be what and if. A conundrum brilliantly worded.

[Neville]

a true gent neva tells Ken .. but one always say's his pleases and thank you's .. please accept mine kind sir .. Neville

[Chris Shaw]

Whispers around the world would only be of interest to gossips. Shout it from the mountain top and I might just listen. What an intriguing write Neville.

Chris

[Neville]

intrigue and love or vice versa are believed to be the building blocks on which this art of ours was founded .. maybe .. a certain thanks are extended tho' our Chris .. Neville

[Chris Shaw]

Nothin wrong with either love or intrigue. They both make the world go round. Good morning Neville. Happy Wednesday.