Why Else Wish Him So Blind

Why Else Wish Him So Blind

A Poem by Neville

Why Else Wish Him So Blind



While these eyes may not be

  

what they once were ..


Do you really think me so blind


that I cannot feel what it is you

  

are doing ..

  

When you play away like that ..


I know precisely who it is


   you are now literally screwing ..


© 2023 Neville


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A little poem Neville which says an awful lot in so few lines. When one of the senses is diminished it is said that the others become far more acute. However, some people just have that ability to pick up vibes. I do it. My grandkids tell me all the time. Yes, I would say that once you smell a rat, you are going to sniff it out. The title, I found particularly strong and the content tells a sad story. You know those vibes make good detectives. That last line is a killer. The word literally adds emphasis.

You convey the hurt here. I felt it.

Another first visit for me. Two days running.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


I was not in a very nice place when I first poemed these words Chris .. in fact. I was in a .. read more
Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

That is a much better place to be in thankfully :)



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Such small but distinctive words of absolute hurt. This rings home for me. So much.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


only if you've been there could you possibly know .. and having read you, I know that you ha.. read more
Ken Simm.

2 Years Ago

Oh yaas. Too right me old mucker.
I felt this, physically, emotionally, mentally. In such short words you have described something of my past. Bravo

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


its good to know I'm not the only one .. thank you friend .. Neville
Masked writer

2 Years Ago

No worries.
A little poem Neville which says an awful lot in so few lines. When one of the senses is diminished it is said that the others become far more acute. However, some people just have that ability to pick up vibes. I do it. My grandkids tell me all the time. Yes, I would say that once you smell a rat, you are going to sniff it out. The title, I found particularly strong and the content tells a sad story. You know those vibes make good detectives. That last line is a killer. The word literally adds emphasis.

You convey the hurt here. I felt it.

Another first visit for me. Two days running.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


I was not in a very nice place when I first poemed these words Chris .. in fact. I was in a .. read more
Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

That is a much better place to be in thankfully :)

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Added on October 10, 2023
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Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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