Why Else Wish Him So Blind

Why Else Wish Him So Blind

While these eyes may not be

  

what they once were ..

Do you really think me so blind

that I cannot feel what it is you

  

are doing ..

  

When you play away like that ..

I know precisely who it is

   you are now literally screwing ..

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

A little poem Neville which says an awful lot in so few lines. When one of the senses is diminished it is said that the others become far more acute. However, some people just have that ability to pick up vibes. I do it. My grandkids tell me all the time. Yes, I would say that once you smell a rat, you are going to sniff it out. The title, I found particularly strong and the content tells a sad story. You know those vibes make good detectives. That last line is a killer. The word literally adds emphasis.

You convey the hurt here. I felt it.

Another first visit for me. Two days running.

Chris

[Neville]

I was not in a very nice place when I first poemed these words Chris .. in fact. I was in a very dark place .. but now I can see the light without it hurting .. Neville

[Chris Shaw]

That is a much better place to be in thankfully :)

[Ken Simm.]

Such small but distinctive words of absolute hurt. This rings home for me. So much.

[Neville]

only if you've been there could you possibly know .. and having read you, I know that you have a bloomin good idea .. thanks Ken .. Neville

[Ken Simm.]

Oh yaas. Too right me old mucker.

[Masked writer]

I felt this, physically, emotionally, mentally. In such short words you have described something of my past. Bravo

[Neville]

its good to know I'm not the only one .. thank you friend .. Neville

[Masked writer]

No worries.