On Top of Old Bones

On Top of Old Bones

A Poem by Neville

On Top of Old Bones




They once made out


in a cemetery


on top of old bones ..


Not for a bet


you understand,


or because it just so


happened


to be Halloween ..


But for the hell of it ..


To her, he meant


nothing at all ..


He was just some


crazy kid ..


While she, was his


number seventeen ..


And just another


short lived ghoul friend ..

 

© 2023 Neville


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Your final line made me laugh. Now if I had been the mum of either one of those kids messing around and on someone’s grave, I would be having a living Halloween nightmare. Got my costume sorted for our Danny’s spooky bash next Saturday. A wish for a Happy Halloween Neville.

Chris



Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


I am not a Halloween fan Chris but I sure hope you enjoy yours .. and thanks for popping in .. read more



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An interesting poem on Halloween. Creepy scene s. Good poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


I am delighted that my little scribble should be considered so .. Many thanks indeed my frie.. read more
Your final line made me laugh. Now if I had been the mum of either one of those kids messing around and on someone’s grave, I would be having a living Halloween nightmare. Got my costume sorted for our Danny’s spooky bash next Saturday. A wish for a Happy Halloween Neville.

Chris



Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


I am not a Halloween fan Chris but I sure hope you enjoy yours .. and thanks for popping in .. read more
That's what I Like about Halloween... anything Ghoulish is bright as Pumpkin Eyes and Black Cats with a Witch and a Broom wrapped around a Tree. Candy is Free and Ghosts keep stopping by for Apple Pie. softly, Pat

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


I have never been a great fan of Halloween or Trick or Treat .. but am quite partial to appl.. read more
Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

dearest Neville... "thick clotted Cream" will make your Scream while "bobbing for Apples" on Hallowe.. read more
Neville

2 Years Ago


......... yikes, you nearly scared the shugar outa me :)

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Added on October 20, 2023
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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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Sometimes my imagination get's the better of me and then the pen takes over .. more..