Down In the Dunes

Down In the Dunes

 

Back in the day,

she was so

much like

a new china doll,

and certainly

no less delicate ..

At first,

I thought I might

even break her ..

Just like

I once broke

the backs

and the spines

of all those

ever so fragile

and tiny,

sea creatures

which once

lived in the sand

where we

played and so

often,

made love ..

Yes right here,

between

these very

same

wind rippled

dunes where our

breathing

got heavy

and laboured ..

My word,

how we were

then overcome ..

And with

such delirious,

unselfish abandon ..

Back in those

good old days,

when we were

still so very young ..

 

Reviews

[jessyyjacob]

I really loved the poems which made nostalgic but if i were you i will not write as my history or past but i would say i was lucky to have lead that life and hoping for it sooon again. I dont want to feel sorry thst it was a memory that has passed. But i will make it a painting of that stoty like in titanic and hand it in my persomal space if bed or almariah i watch it daily and as we see thry become our thoughts as we think we imagine more and yearn for and as we yearn our sub conscious mind makes it to think to make it happen.

I wish you follow your dreams as it is easy that once fufilled never become hard to become reality. Aim for good which made it and aim for better to make them again and stay with you not make as past but as current ever ending.

Neiv good luck
Keep writing
Jessy jacob
Missing you

[Neville]

Thank you for todays visit Jessy, the numbers don't matter, its the words left behind that count .. Neville

[jessyyjacob]

How fair you are sir you blame others by being you cgeat itself.

[Chris Shaw]

I can feel the yearning here for history. How beautifully you have penned your feelings here. Young and madly in love in the sand dunes, oblivious to your surroundings. Those feelings can change over time. It’s wonderful to remember the thrill of those early days as the years pass by. Have a grand weekend Neville.

Chris

[Neville]

thank you Chris & kindly and truly .. of course and you tooly .. Neville