This is Us ..

This is Us ..

A Poem by Neville
"

.. every now and then, I wonder, can she still feel it too ..

"

This is Us ..




Your pain my


love


quite simply


hurts me


far too much ..


I can not


bear to feel


you suffer so ..


When


you burn,


I do blister


and when you


bleed


my heart,


then


I bleed too ..


Indeed,


this ache we


share is


all consuming ..


Who


passes first


I fear,


shall never


let the other go ..


 


 


© 2023 Neville


Author's Note

Neville

.. when you pass these words by .. remember just how deep paper cuts ..

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I know that feeling and your final words I both understand and consider frequently, especially as the years pass. All I can say is that’s love for you. Really nice sentiment expressed here Neville.

And now I see your author’s note:)

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


you are so fookin good with wurds .. I shall go write another & ta our Chris.

.. read more
Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Ta chuck :) ……………



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I know that feeling and your final words I both understand and consider frequently, especially as the years pass. All I can say is that’s love for you. Really nice sentiment expressed here Neville.

And now I see your author’s note:)

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


you are so fookin good with wurds .. I shall go write another & ta our Chris.

.. read more
Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

Ta chuck :) ……………

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Added on October 27, 2023
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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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